Hiding amongst the molecules

I hid behind the veil

waiting to surprise you

but you never appeared

so I melted into the fabric

and became a part of the universe

that is never more to be seen

a molecule among millions

I found my place and am happy there

faceless, indivisible, a cosmos

inside a myriad of stars

a silhouette inverted

a ghostly whisper of a dream

floating around in a whirlpool

of eternal teardrops.

Hiding

◄ Beyond this place

Gentle caress ►

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 13th Feb 2019 16:18

Thank you everyone for the likes.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 12th Feb 2019 19:48

Po πŸ™

poemagraphic

Tue 12th Feb 2019 19:37

Alone in a crowd.

A molecule can never be truly alone, can never truly hide.

It is 'bound' to attract to exist.

Jon this poem is extremely attractive note the people it has drawn in.

Great piece of imagery my friend

Po

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 12th Feb 2019 19:07

Thank you, Rich and Jennifer

jennifer Malden

Tue 12th Feb 2019 18:05

Beautiful beautiful beautiful!

Jennifer

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Rich

Mon 11th Feb 2019 21:07

wonderful stuff, Jon. Really enjoyed this.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 20:47

Thank you so much, Anya. 😘

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Anya

Mon 11th Feb 2019 20:44

Wow!!! This is my favourite of yours Jon! Truly excellent! 😘

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 19:11

Thanks very much, Jason

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 11th Feb 2019 19:09

That is such a poignant piece of writing. Love it.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:59

Thanks, Mae ❀

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Mae Foreman

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:57

Wow! Excellent piece Jon! I think you've found your style!🎈Bravo! I'd sure like to know how that feels one way!
Thank you 🎈
Mae

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:46

Thanks, Keith, Brian and Paris.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:45

Thank you, Vautaw. 🌷

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Vautaw

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:20

Love this one John. Thanks for sharing your soul songs. πŸ’–

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