Not for me another love

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Not for me another love

like choking fear

It will not budge

I dare not blink

for it now seems

that by choosing drink

I dwell in dreams

I grind to bits

my words and teeth

when searching through

my history:

to lift above

what lay beneath

all that broken masonry. ...

 

words and foto Tommy Carroll

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Tue 12th Feb 2019 10:33

Lots of layers here, intriguing

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Tue 12th Feb 2019 03:03

Very clever. Thank you, Tommy.

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Martin Elder

Mon 11th Feb 2019 23:17

marvellous stuff Tommy. Starkness is great. I am personally just a bit too verbose.
Nice one

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 8th Feb 2019 22:37

Really like this, though it's a bit stark, but stark is good it's good.

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