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Yesterdays Kiss

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Wear your cracks and your scars boldly, proudly,

Proclaim and explain your hurts loudly,

Don't disguise or hide them away,

They're yesterdays kiss on the face of today.

 

A person is born of a father and mother,

Personality comes from somewhere other,

Put your cracks and your scars on proud display,

They're yesterdays kiss on the face of today.

◄ Incline Lupine

Ms.Donohoe Poetry Tennis Champion. ►

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun 10th Feb 2019 09:55

Hear, hear, Lisa. Couldn't have made a better comment.
(That's why he's on my favourites list, too, Lisa.)
Well done, again, Jason.

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kJ Walker

Sat 9th Feb 2019 08:23

Really liked this one. I wish I had the ability to get the point across in so few words. (I tend to ramble on a bit)
Nice rhyming too.

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 8th Feb 2019 11:31

Thanks Lisa, I don't know what to say. I said you have a beautiful, honest way of expressing yourself, and you do, and it's left me quite humbled. Thank you.

J.

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lisa donohoe

Fri 8th Feb 2019 11:17

I had to add you to my favorites..
The way you express yourself using the simplest of words holds more meaning than most other poem's I read.
I adore your work and appreciate your talent immensely.
Great piece jay ?
Another one for the kids to learn from ??
Well done

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