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The Grin of A Killer

As the air thickens around me
The blood of another man was all over these walls
I may have not understood his language
As I watched the light from his eyes slowly fade
They were screaming help me but I didn't listen
For after all the beautiful scarlet was all around me
As a grin took over my face
I could leave the body of this pedophile on the ground
No one would mourn his fate
For this is only the beginning of God's work
Who would know no one's allowed in the bottom of the chapel but me

◄ A Broken Callous Heart

The Grin of A Killer 2 Little John Doe ►

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lisa donohoe

Fri 8th Feb 2019 15:55

how correct he was in saying so ?
Brilliant.. I can not wait for the rest to hit my screen
Great job ?

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Damon Blackery

Fri 8th Feb 2019 15:34

Lisa MLK said an eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind. This Poem is more of a three-part series of a poem and this would be part 1.

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lisa donohoe

Fri 8th Feb 2019 08:13

Extremely chilling , I believe no man nor woman should take justice into their own hands. One day all evil will burn in hell for eternal life ' a punishment worth waiting for.. An eye for an eye will only ever leave the other soul waiting in line with the monster he Punished for the reasons he felt wore justified..

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