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Wolf Rock

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Strong and lonely light house,

bleak master,

faithful presence

guarding me from harm.

Never to have a companion -

for what good would two light houses be,

standing close together?

You are wisdom,

strong father,

faithful lover,

but in your isolation

I want to cry for you,

tears salt as the sea.

For you, for me.

No one will ever visit you,

youll never hear a voice

for all eternity

youll be alone now on the Wolf Rock.

Or is the sea your companion,

fluidity to your static power,

fluctuating to your stoicism,

sometimes flattering, teasing,

sometimes threatening, destructive,

leaving you puzzled but still standing.

Is this an allegory of you and me?

Were you always the light house,

was I always the sea?

And I dont think I can ever go again

to those islands.

I couldnt bear to see the light house

standing so lonely

on the Wolf Rock.

Because for me, it always will mean you

standing alone there,

alone for all eternity

while my tides race on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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<Deleted User> (7164)

Sun 7th Feb 2010 16:45

Hi Ann, i read this shortly after you posted it and read it again today to fully appreciate it.
It is hauntingly sad and the sea draws me in every time.

I agree with Greg as to stopping at ''was i always the sea?' because it is so much stronger that way but i do also fully understand your reasons for not wanting to. I have much the same problem in my own poems.
Is that what people mean by 'precious?' well... if it does then i am. Hmmmm.....
Janet.x

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Cate Greenlees

Sat 6th Feb 2010 20:41

Hi Anne, I agree with TC...there is a very sad lonely feel to this but life continues and as you say your tides are racing on. Maybe some day you will feel strong enough to visit the lighthouse again and remember the good memories it evokes.
Cate xx

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Francine

Sat 6th Feb 2010 15:30

I have always been fascinated with lighthouses, and what they represent. This is such a touching poem Ann.
I agree with what TC wrote as well...

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 6th Feb 2010 13:51

Hi Greg - re Wolf Rock, thanx for commenting. There were meant to be line spacings at various places but they wouldn't come up when I pasted the poem. I did try and gave up! As to the suggested ending, you may be right. I feel that the very last line works for me though, and makes the poem. I guess when the story is a real one, i.e. I couldn't go there again because of memories, it means more to the writer, and when it's so personal it is hard to edit. xx

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Greg Freeman

Sat 6th Feb 2010 10:06

Ann, having had another look at Wolf Rock, and having heard you read it as well, I wonder if you might consider ending it a few lines earlier, at "was I always the sea?" Or, if not, perhaps leave a line space between that line and the rest of the poem? Curse me for meddling if you will! Greg

<Deleted User> (7073)

Sat 6th Feb 2010 05:44

For me this evoked feelings of sadness, especially with the allegorical reference, and allusion made to an eternity spent in solitude. A moving poem with pathos. Luv TC X

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Greg Freeman

Fri 5th Feb 2010 22:06

Interesting to read up about Wolf Rock, Ann, that it is built upon a steeple of rock. The one I know is the Bishop Rock lighthouse, at the far end of the Isles of Scilly. Went on a boat trip there as a boy. Saw lots of seals, but what got me was gazing at that empty ocean and realising that the next stop was America. Greg

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