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Today my mind

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Today my mind is like the sky

it’s colours reflect my mood,

sparkling blue; with pools of ink.

 

As thoughts disperse, I dip in my finger

and write, no need to think.

 

Today my mind is akin to a tree,

It’s contours blow freely, my shackles

lift like leaves.

 

Today my mind is an ocean,

each breaking wave; I am fresh and new,

my shoreline reminds me of the present -

and takes away the past.

 

Today my mind turns to a book; it’s pages

tell the story of my life: I decide not to look.

 

Instead I walk, talk to a stranger,

we share a thought…

 

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Belinda Johnston

Fri 8th Feb 2008 23:12

Thankyou Zuzanna and Mel for your comments on my poem.

I wrote this poem because as humans we often punish ourselves, beat ourselves up about the most trivial of things, and we are only hurting ourselves and in the process I feel that this takes us further away from out true self, and we can become detached from others'.

Thank you again

Belinda x :))

<Deleted User> (5984)

Sun 3rd Feb 2008 11:56

Bel

A beautiful poem, soothing and sensitive.

Mel
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<Deleted User> (4281)

Sat 2nd Feb 2008 20:29

Hi, Belinda,
Loved your poem! It is imaginative and connected to Nature which is my favorite. You have great use of the metaphors as well.
Great Write!!!

Zuzanna

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