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Taken by the heartless kiss

Hurt by lies spoken held under sheets
filled with deciet now a painful memory


soon sealed with a heartless kiss
put beneith the rubble

in search of such
truth once thought found

Broken by loss left behind
searching where right turned wrong
a love tainted by the unwilling touch
that had once graced thy brow
yet again

soon discovered the broken heart
left aside next to a self conviction


Within grasp of the ungrateful
lacking anothers trust again
bound by last nights dream
words set in stone

Passed away by nights dream
pondering a love given away

Enprisoned by the impostion
fighting what is now slaughtering
me alive desecrating me
from within

Hurt by lies unspoken the truth will never

 mend me

Gorged by a ruthless tongue
ensured with a cruel duplicity
put beneith the ruins

seeking
a true love certian
once found

but soon lost

Broken by souless perdition
left to chase the feelings again
a love scorned

by the embrase


that had once grazed thy hand

in this very moment of need

Taken away by a nights dream
pondering the heartless memory
left to entertain the broken hearted

Swollowed by the nights demise
pondering a love placed within trusted
hands

left to shower upon my
frail body

Too weak to feel the storm hovering above
an obstruction shattering below

I fall

Failing to see where its path has taken me

I am soon crawling on fragmented glass yet driven

blood running thin with tears

being shed

 upon my palms

Taken away by a nights dream
Broken by perdition

Enprisoned by the impostion
pondering a love given away

The words now set in stone

its a love tainted

for good reason...

 

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clarissa mckone

Thu 31st Jan 2008 18:17

HI Chris, this is very nice. It reminds me a little of some of my work. I enjoyed reading it!

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Philip Golding

Thu 31st Jan 2008 16:52

Chris,you have natural talent to capture raw emotions.I look forward to reading more of your work.

Keep on with your quality writing

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Thu 31st Jan 2008 14:49

Hi Chris

Very profound and sad write. Unrequited love toughs on my heart strings-well written with fantastic flow poem, pleasure to read.


"Too weak to feel the storm hovering above
an obstruction shattering below
I fall
Failing to see where its path has taken me
I am soon crawling on fragmented glass yet driven blood running thin with tears
being shed upon my palms"

I could picture the pain of the writer in this particular stanza...GREAT POEM!

Zuzanna

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