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I Almost Lost You

A few words were said in anger

but their inferences vanished

when the tear ducts began to swell

and a lump suffocated me

and you just retreated further

and still haven’t quite returned home.

 

I almost lost you and still feel

Like I did.

◄ The Bookie Always Wins

Life Stops At 30 ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (19913)

Wed 5th Dec 2018 11:56

Neil, I've come back to this a second time. You've captured that moment of a shift in a relationship so perfectly. Beautiful work.

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Douglas MacGowan

Wed 5th Dec 2018 01:51

Wow, a really great capture of sad feelings in a very few words.

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