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Drowning in your eyes

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Drowning in your eyes

 

We sit cocooned by the velvet night

My hand nestled inside your hand

Our bodies vibrating to the same frequency of life

You smile and I glow in the dark

We are both drowning in a sea of eyes

We move together in a water ballet of miniscule motions

As fingers knot together and hearts lock together

Our lips touch – and we drown.

◄ fatal attraction

Human Jenga ►

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raypool

Tue 20th Nov 2018 21:16

Ah - memories! Such a lovely use of softness and- re assurance that I say congratulations!

Ray

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walkingman

Mon 19th Nov 2018 16:58

I really liked these two parts

...bodies vibrating to the same frequency of life

And

...a water ballet of miniscule motions...

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