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Ache

He was her friend, and she said goodbye to him.

Though she didn’t see him often, when she did see him 

the goodbye was so powerful it still lingered in the air she breathed 

her heart ached for the friend she used to know

◄ Miss memory

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raypool

Tue 20th Nov 2018 20:41

This feels like a hammer blow of emotion. Direct and powerful.

Ray

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Martin Elder

Sun 18th Nov 2018 23:10

A lot summed up by the brevity of words.
Nice one

<Deleted User> (19913)

Sun 18th Nov 2018 10:53

Wrenching. I felt every word.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 17th Nov 2018 20:47

Love this..?

<Deleted User> (18474)

Sat 17th Nov 2018 20:31

Things left unsaid leave this poem open to the reader.
It's brevity gives it greater weight and power.
The third line is fantastic.
Thanks Megan for posting this.
Beno.

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