GOODBYE MY LOVE

He was like sunshine

peaking out

from a big black cloud

 

My heart would skip a beat

when we would first meet

 

Then the thunder

would come

and the rain would fall

 

The saddest thing of all

was I loved him

 

But could not drown

with him

 

So I said goodbye.

 

By Lynn Hahn

◄ HOPE

BRING IT ►

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lynn hahn

Fri 16th Nov 2018 17:24

Thank you! I sure do appreciate your comments. Keeps the juices going. Love reading your poems too. They keep my smile going. 😀

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 15th Nov 2018 18:56

Wonderful Lynn 😃

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Nov 2018 06:13

Beautifully crafted 😎

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 15th Nov 2018 04:48

Lovely

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