Hi!  I was hoping to get some feedback on this poem which  wrote with my four year old son in mind. Hopefully you'll like it!

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An elephant came home one day,
t'was greeted by a mouse.
The elephant then looked at he
"Why are you in my house?"

The mouse he jumped upon a chair,
and gave a little cough.
He looked old Elly in the eye
"I'm sure I must be lost

I came inside to beat the cold
and slept beside the fire
I tried to take the cosy chair
but found it so much higher

I poured some tea + ate the crumbs
upon the pantry floor
and just as I was 'bout to leave
you came in through the door!"

Poor Elly, he was so surprised
he fell on his behind.
He scratched the hair upon his head
"What a thing to find!"

The mouse then bid a kind farewell
and hopped down from his chair
he gave a wave
and then was gone
leaving poor Elly sitting there!