Through shallows his soul roams, feeling destined to manifest ones passion, Drout deteriorates mind, mind collapses into a unretrievable state, all is lost and not one past mistake can bare, sympathy moves his heart as it falls apart. in the end he is gone. What was once me is now gone.?.

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Big Sal

Thu 25th Oct 2018 15:54

Sounded to me a little bit like 'Death Stranding' by Hideo Kojima. You know his work? He's a master at his craft. .

This, though short, more than made up for it with the powerful word choice. Nicely done.?

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