My bird's eye view...
Blurred by you.
My 3rd eye, blue.
Not hue...
But my mood.
I brood for my shrew.
Wouldn't tame ya...
Or blame ya.
Stayed true to my cool.
Withdrew to my brew.
A poet, yet stoic
When you needed my fuel.
Left you all alone
Undisturbed bayou.
A love that once burned...
Now in an urn.
Our meeting's been adjourned.
Been spurned by you.
Big Sal
Thu 11th Oct 2018 02:55
Fucking great way to carry that rhyme. I know I probably sound like a broken record by now, but I don't read much rhyming poetry besides my own - so it's refreshing to read. Nice job on all of these pieces man.?
Word.
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.
Taylor Crowshaw
Thu 11th Oct 2018 05:02
Very lyrical nice flow great rhythm and rhyme..?