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The Woods

                                                            The Woods    

 

 

I be like a forest,

My greens and browns -

My leaves and bark for cover,

But beneath the foliage,

Beneath the canopy

That sunlight flickers as you

Toe a track that’s scarred,

There is another universe;

A universe of stars.

 

 

Each leaf declares its own

Within a fractal,

Does not deny its roots,

Gains nourishment from all

That fall – foraged on

A shadowed floor

As natures course;

Revealing policies of truth.

 

 

            Many Giants come and

Go this way, yet never stray from

Paths so worn, never venture glades

So full of multitudes,

            Never have courage to explore.

 

 

Better stay on open ground

Before the woods my friend,

Forget the bracken thorns and thistle,

For break of escaping own

Reality of lies,

Might just,

            Give back,

                        Your life!

 

 

 

 

Michael J Waite 11thJanuary 2010

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Isobel

Wed 13th Jan 2010 12:38

I've read this one a few times trying to get to grips with its meaning. I like it cos it feels like a very different path for you. To me, it seems you are saying, that if you look for an easy route in life you won't really engage, encounter reality, truth or be absorbed into a meaningful cycle. Sometimes all of the above coexists with trial, hardship and imperfection. It is through our difficult experiences that we learn to truly understand and to appreciate the good things in life. Does any of that make sense?

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jane wilcock

Tue 12th Jan 2010 20:49

lovely and true

<Deleted User> (7164)

Mon 11th Jan 2010 13:26

I enjoyed this very much too.
I love the philosophy between the lines. I also love to compare the nature of people to trees and often see them in the form of a tree. The many branches being aspects of their life and the twists and turns they've taken along the way. The new ones coming through in the form of new opportunities and new ventures etc.... etc....

I could go on forever. Thanks for sparking this train of thought processes.

Janet.x

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Francine

Mon 11th Jan 2010 03:18

I love this Mike!
Very inspirational and positive : )

So many great lines in this...

'There is another universe;
A universe of stars.'

'Many Giants come and
Go this way, yet never stray from
Paths so worn, never venture glades
So full of multitudes,
Never have courage to explore.'

Francine x


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