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Old Man

I've been looking for the right thing to say
You're the most beautiful lady I've ever seen
I know you won't be home anytime soon

The consistency of the way I tell you goodnight 
Has you thinking it's just a hobby for me
The truth is there's love in every word I send you

Just remember I only have one heart and I gave it to you
I promise to stay loyal to you so please come home soon
Please don't leave me the old man that says I'm forever alone

◄ Still Love Her

One Lonely Snowflake ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (19913)

Fri 21st Sep 2018 12:28

So sweet and moving.

<Deleted User> (19421)

Fri 21st Sep 2018 11:14

Oh wow - I love this..

Very moving,

I really like the second stanza, very powerful, very lovely and very well written.

Nice one

Cheers

DJB

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