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Seasons Haiku

thrusting green shoots

speckle dark branches

a sparrow alights

 

floral perfume

on mellow evening breeze

a blood-red sun sets

 

autumn coloured leaves

covering forest glade

a murmuration flies

 

stark dank branches

clawing into dark skies

a snowflake falls

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<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 18th Sep 2018 14:14

they work for me Trevor.

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 18th Sep 2018 12:48

I'm still a bit uncomfortable with haiku - never sure what's good. So thanks for the confidence boost.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 17th Sep 2018 11:46

I'll second that with pleasure Trev. Brillsville!






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Stu Buck

Mon 17th Sep 2018 11:06

lovely haiku trev. i particularly like the second, lot of descriptive imagery yet still holds its form.

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