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Tell me what you think

Tell me what you think of my words,

my poems,

the stories I create.

Tell me what you think of my wit,

my worlds I make,

the way I write.

Tell me what you think I do well,

could do better,

give me another outlook on my writing.

Tell me what you think because

your opinions matter.

They help me realize how well I write,

what I do well, 

what I did or wrote wrong.

I need your say in this,

because you make me a better 

person and writer when you 

tell me what you think.

You matter to me,

even if you think you don’t.

You are my saving grace,

my anchor.

I came here for a safe haven,

a sanctuary,

but I wasn’t sure what you’d think.

Was I bad?

Was I good?

I didn’t expect to be good at all.

But you showed me my talent.

I want to say thank you for all 

that you’ve done for me.

How did I do?

On this poem?

Tell me what you think,

if you want.

It helps me grow.

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Comments

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Space Girl

Wed 26th Sep 2018 21:40

I agree wholeheartedly.
I also thank you so much
For your help.
I have grown so much
Under your advice and comments.
This is helping me light my way.

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Don Matthews

Tue 25th Sep 2018 09:33

I just can't understand this
Can't understand it Elle
Why no-one has responded
To tell you you write well

It's obvious to me
You're asking for feedback
Does no-one want to give it?
Why feedback do you lack?

Like you I want to know
On poems how did I go?
For as we both agree
Feedback is how we grow

D ?

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