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I watched you leaf through the cumulus of yesterdays thoughts,

There`s a happiness missing as the smile plays truant,

Your mind crawls between the web dust and into the

cosy corner of books,

An implacable eye seeks the details in the emptiness of pages,

The stars will explain a bit of mystery for you,

Drifting into-the-wide-blue-yonder the wind throw`s

it`s howl,

torn pieces from a dream artistically folded into raindrops

and somewhere someone will turn a thought.

◄ Ocean poem

After reading a Huxley quote ►


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Zuzanna Musial

Sun 27th Jan 2008 21:35

Hello Neil--Imaginative and thought provoking poem.Life often creates a hurdles and it is difficult to be happy at all times. You have captured that in your poem quite well.

"Your mind crawls between the web dust and into the cosy corner of books,"

Loved the attached picture... Zuzanna

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Paul F Blackburn

Wed 23rd Jan 2008 14:51

Hi Neil
I like the imagery and tautness of both these poems - keep 'em coming

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