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SERIES OF LIFE

DON'T MAKE ME MEAN

Mean people carry a disease

I do not want to catch

 

EMOTIONS

Emotions seem to travel 

thru the air

Digging their way

into our day

 

LOOK AT YOURSELF

Easy to see the flaws in others

take a good look at yourself

before you jump to judgement

 

THE DARK

Can you communicate with the dark

without becoming it?

 

FREEDOM

Allowing yourself and others

to make mistakes

brings freedom

 

TRY TILL YOU DIE

All you can do is

try until you die

Perfection

was never 

born.

By Lynn Hahn

◄ SWEET SIMPLICITY

SLEEPLESS IN TACOMA ►

Comments

Big Sal

Wed 5th Sep 2018 00:21

I'll be sure to let you know as soon as I am done.

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lynn hahn

Tue 4th Sep 2018 21:18

Why help yourself Big Sal. I am sure you can do it great justice. Please let me know if you are so inspired. I want to hear that tune. ?

Big Sal

Tue 4th Sep 2018 14:07

Top line of the last stanza would make a great song. . .I may borrow the line for a song title.?

Loved this piece, each stanza was like a self-contained poem in itself. Great job Lynn.?

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