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waters

Like pitied ships

we are afloat in perilous breaking waters

of which not one of us will see the coast


while silence lays heavy on the land

like a dead man's cloak...

 

Some few cry through to us like beacons

to forbid the wake of further disaster--

and, truly, no ship does shore to rock

for fear of fading light's travail;

 

Some strong of us will fail for silence' sake,

evenwhile some sailors continue

to stand the livings' mast

just out of liberty's earshot


while the stormy sound of the sea

rages recklessly onward.

◄ sonogenesis

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Comments

elPintor

Fri 17th Aug 2018 22:42

I'm very thankful for such kind and moving comments. I hold this little piece close and return to it every once in a while as a reminder of how I felt when I penned it--seems maybe an accurate perspective of where we stand in the present can only be evaluated truthfully with an eye on the past.

Many thanks to all who read, also,

Rachel x

Big Sal

Thu 16th Aug 2018 19:20

I can throw away lines years before and come back to them way later and apply them. Still powerful, and still a reckoning. Good thing you didn't leave this gem at home, it functions much better when posted for all to see.?

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Thu 16th Aug 2018 14:02

Some strong of us will fail for silence' sake... this resonated with me Rachel. Very, very poignant.

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Martin Elder

Thu 16th Aug 2018 11:18

The thing I like about your poetry the most is I am drawn in the read it over and over to soak in the full meaning of the words.
beautiful Rachel

I love it

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 16th Aug 2018 10:54

Coming from beside the sea, from family of fishermen some lost to the sea. This resonated deeply with me. Thank you. Beautiful

elPintor

Thu 16th Aug 2018 00:55

This is a repost. I've rewritten it so much, but now is the time to let it go once more...

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