EOD

EOD

 

I taught nothing 

nobody listened

 

I eavesdropped 

on conversations

 

remembered 

tried to imagine

 

morning came 

sometimes I relented

 

but I was there 

head full of danger  

 

heart full 

of mother

 

even when 

I could’ve killed 

the people 

 

I was working for

I still wore 

 

the button- 

down shirt 

◄ Life is Suicide

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Wolfgar Miere

Sat 11th Aug 2018 00:10

All respect to you brother.

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Robert C Gaulke

Sat 11th Aug 2018 00:04

re: title. Yes. Thanks for your feedback. R

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elPintor

Fri 10th Aug 2018 11:28

You have quite a talent for being plainspoken without being boring or mundane--a skill I've tried to master with little success.

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Wolfgar Miere

Fri 10th Aug 2018 11:23

This speaks to me of duty, and not necessarily one you agree with. Is the title a reference to what you (the subject) was engaged in.

I appreciate it could stand for any number of things, but that is just how it struck me.

Often our uniforms do not portray our beliefs, that is a concept that maybe only a minority might understand, thankfully.

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Stu Buck

Fri 10th Aug 2018 09:36

nice one robert. the picture you paint is morbid yet you kept me interested. a fine voice.

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