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My Strawberry Milkshake

oh this man 

sweet as a strawberry milkshake from a country waffle house

 

you are a keeper

i think if we keep going the way we are going 

i might just marry you

 

we have come such a long way

5 years in the making my love.

we've got eachother figured out for the most part.

took us nearly 5 years to grow up and take this relationship serious, FINALLY.

 

just last night we talked for what seemed like an eternity.

we had a disagreement that upset the both of us.

but we managed to discuss it like adults.

and it was the best thing i've ever done with you. 

baby, its like we held each others hands and jumped a few steps forward.

i love you.

 

 

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Martin Elder

Wed 1st Aug 2018 22:01

The poem also seems very grown up
Nice one

Big Sal

Wed 1st Aug 2018 16:06

2nd line sets the piece apart from other love poems. Nice job.?

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