This is my girl
She's looking so frail
She's her mother's pride
Thin, white, sliced.
She hurts with a cutter
She spreads just like butter
She's her mother's pride
With nowhere to hide.
This is my girl
A broken pearl
She's her mother's pride
Thin, white and sliced.
Sadly I do remember Maggie (David) and Cyril (Brian). Apology accepted, I'm only grateful that nobody has commented on the bottom falling out of my brazier!
This was headed for the grand burning - I burned so many old notebooks that the bottom fell out of my brazier. Just thought it deserved a final read before entering oblivion.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Thu 28th Jun 2018 07:36
bloody brilliant Hazel.
Well done Hazel ?
Pat Hughes
Wed 27th Jun 2018 22:56
That last line is so powerful.
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 27th Jun 2018 20:27
Nice one Hazel.
Nice one Cyril was the catchphrase of the Wonderloaf advert in the 70's
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Tina Glover
Fri 29th Jun 2018 17:27
Amazingly done Hazel what nice twist to this piece! ??