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I'm Just a Lowly Poet (Brian will help me out)

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I'm just a lowly poet

Trying to learn the ropes

My friend said it will drive me nuts

How am I gonna cope ?

 

A lowly poet, yes, I am

Trying to learn the ropes

Iamb. trochee, spondee SCREAM !

How am I gonna cope ?

 

Although a lowly poet

I now have poet friends

Despite 10,000 miles away

I won't go round the bend

 

Now Brian M and others

Will help me learn the ropes

Despite 10,000 miles away

I'm sure they'll help me cope

 

Now your Brian Maryon interests me

A poet of some note

He comments here and comments there

Nor does he sugarcoat

 

He seems a just-right mentor

For lowly poet-follow

His comments deeply serious

And never, ever hollow

 

I'm sure he's read of Hazel E's

Roll-naked in the mud

Funny, there's no comment yet ?

 

(Is it 'cause he does it?...)

 

Don Matthews June 2018

◄ Metaphorically

Imperfect Leaders ►

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Don Matthews

Fri 8th Jun 2018 16:44

O Hannah I've just realised
It's you who teared me up
Your Laughter Artist writing upturned
My emotion-cup

I like you, and your writing
It pulls emotions out
And that's why we write poetry
That's what it's all about

Yes?

Now this Brian Maryon ?
He wouldn't hurt a fly
We both know there's been no cash exchanged
(She's just being her usual nice Hannah self)

Don ?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 8th Jun 2018 10:22

Hannah - has Don paid you to say that?

(If not, thanks!)

<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 8th Jun 2018 09:27

Writing poetry is a wonderful thing.
It's true, Brian is cool.

Hannah

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Don Matthews

Wed 6th Jun 2018 14:20

Now this is rather interesting
Letters I did not know
What the hell is FFS ?
So Googling I did go

Now Brian you did so shock me
With such base language use
Upon this hallowed website
Of which you're quite profuse

Of course you know, you realise
Administrations strict
Commit bad language usage
And off you will get kicked

DM ?



<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 6th Jun 2018 13:36

Well obviously I've got to like it when I'm mentioned three times FFS!

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