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Under Water

It's like a river crashing down
upon me.
A giant wave
hit the rocky shore.
I keep too much inside.
I never let my heart breathe.
I busy my mind
with distractions and dreams.
I ride the ocean.
I just forget that the wave
that I cling to
will come down,
crashing upon me,
and I will have no choice
but to feel.
I rather keep my emotions
under water,
but there are times
when the river will
crash down upon me.

Under Water
by, Melissa R. Mendelson

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4281)

Thu 17th Jan 2008 07:20

Melissa~ This poem is wonderful!
You have described a lot of emotions that you experience in life. Thought provoking as well. Great use of metamorphosis.

GREAT POEM!!!

Zuzanna


I busy my mind
with distractions and dreams.
I ride the ocean.
I just forget that the wave
that I cling to
will come down,
crashing upon me,
and I will have no choice
but to feel.

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clarissa mckone

Thu 17th Jan 2008 01:44

Hi Melissa, This is a nice poem. Hope your well! Clarissa

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