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My Loved Ones

My Loved Ones

 

I love you; bitch!

I love you; idiot.

I love you; shut up.

I love you; leave me alone.

I love you; go away.

I love you; what’s the matter with you?

I love you; you’re killing me!

I love you; I really do.

I love you; what’s wrong with me?

I love you; forgive me.

I love you; I’m sorry!

I love you; Thank you.

I love you; I love you; I love you.

◄ Drowning

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Andrew Willis

Thu 5th Apr 2018 13:17

Thanks Big Sal.

Hi Hazel, these are words I have used to express my love to those closest to me. Saying and meaning one thing but expressing it in another contradictory way.

However, I like the idea of seeing it as a poem to self - of learning to love oneself again even when some aspects are not always loveable.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 5th Apr 2018 10:17

Poem to self?

Big Sal

Thu 5th Apr 2018 03:24

Very open and honest.

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Andrew Willis

Wed 4th Apr 2018 23:41

These are words I have spoken to my loved ones at times this past 12 months as life has become tough and the mind weak.

Hope is again dawning and the real love is showing once more.

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