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Kathmandu 1

i was ready to be surprised

New language, new culture

I wasn't ready for you.

You rolled a joint and made some tea

Took me to your bed and

Taught me stuff I didn't know.

We said goodbye at breakfast

Went our separate ways but,

Come the evening, there you were again.

"It's better if you do it like this" you said

"My god, so it is" I replied

So glad you stayed my toy boy man.

"Going to Darjeeling tomorrow

My visa soon runs out."

But here you are again, another night.

Drinking jars of Tumba, eating biscuits,

Watching boxset DVDs.

More joints, more tea, more you, more me.

You left on day fifteen.

No tears, just warmth and gratitude

And ready to be surprised.

◄ Arriving at Annapurna Basecamp

Kathmandu 2 ►

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 3rd Apr 2018 07:54

Truth is, Ray, it was years past my hippie days and therefore utterly surprising. I went to Nepal to do voluntary work for 2 years and let go of a lot of old notions that had formed my identity over the decades.

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raypool

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 21:13

This to me has a resonance of the hippy culture about it Hazel. The casual but fulfilling experience is part of that, I suppose. You do it justice with your light touch. Those lines about "it's better if you do it like this..." has a nice innuendo touch to it, flirting with the imagination.

Ray

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 2nd Apr 2018 19:45

How rude, Brian. Actually it wasn't quite as straight forward as that.

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Mon 2nd Apr 2018 19:32

Should've called it "The Mounting" Hazel

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