Penny Note
1/8 oz Penny
Lure into a dampen storm
late afternoon notes to explain
briefly play away no matter rain
here comes moment wandering here comes
my spare penny comes into the middle, so sweet
here comes, how you play
~
play the moment through, i'll explain
afternoon rain dampens lure
play the afternoon rain dampens lure
~
I'm aware, i wonder if i can a gentle move, silenced rain
exactly except for the addition of single drop play the moment through, i'll explain briefly play away no matter rain.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 31st Mar 2018 20:28
when I read this earlier today I couldn't decide whether I liked it or not but I was certainly intrigued. Hazel's comment has drawn me back for another read and I'm glad I've given it and the Gull's Words of a Song another chance. I hope you have some more to share? All the best. Colin.