Art Museum

She kissed me
between the paintings

The pattern of her lips
left an imprinting

more fascinating
than the etchings in the fossils surrounding us

Her touch more absorbing
than the Dalí hanging on the wall

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Fri 9th Mar 2018 12:15

Excellent and makes a really strong point, that life now is what really counts. May I suggest that the last line in my opinion is superfluous to the strength of the poem? With respect.


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Thu 8th Mar 2018 22:43

Thanks so much Drea ?

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Thu 8th Mar 2018 22:33

I love this!

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