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I lay my head

Would I lay my head upon the block?

My neck into the noose

My body to be stretched

Bent and gashed upon the rack

To be devoured by hungry hearts

Allow my head to be placed upon a spike

For all that I would hold dear

For the revelry of all of those

Who would watch and sneer

Against accusations and false imprisonments

To satisfy the lust of those

Who would say they

And they alone hold the true faith

And that apparently, I do not

Would I argue and debate?

With all of those others

All that they defend and hold up in to the light

When it Is seen to be no more

Than dancing shadows

That shrink and fade

Turned to dust

When for all of us to an end must come

 

Or will I stand just and right

Not on my pride

But on the side of each and every man

To be able to walk, talk and declare

In his own beliefs

With no recompense or threat of certain death

Which becomes a stain upon us all

Who live in its wake

That I would as all others be able

To rest my head upon my lover’s breast

 

Would I be the first to cast the stone

Of the outraged and righteous

With stiffened neck

Place the offending severed head

Upon this tarnished plate

And declare

Now it is done

Once and

For all

Enough

When in reality it is done for none

Other than my own sense of self

 

Or would I temper my rage

Of smitten steel eyed words

With mercy and the kiss of grace

Upon the brow

Of those who would

Do me wrong or disagree

With those I have learned to distrust

Or would I hope and pray

Recognise that I am no more than a boy

In the body of an aging man

Who cannot allow

That which has been

Eat away at his very soul

 

So, I could simply say

You and I we are different

But the same

◄ Hidden treasure

Standing on death ►

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Martin Elder

Tue 27th Feb 2018 14:16

Thanks to Pat Colin Desmond and Hannah for liking and Thanks to Rose Ray and Kevin for commenting

No need to worry Rose I haven't grown boobs

I am glad that you were able to not get to bogged down with this one Ray. I am sometimes write things that make me stop and think.

Kevin you got this completely right. I wrote it in the first place thinking of the recent series around Guy Fawkes which made me reflect how I would have felt bearing in mind I am looking from a 21st century perspective.
Again you are right about the parallels with today upon which I reflect with all the conflicting perspectives we are bombarded with. But what it simply boils down to for me is that we are all human beings trying desperately at times to make our way in this world.

So I guess I come back to Rays philosophical observations which remind me although there is so much that is awful about the world that we live in what we do to each other and the planet at times dreadful ways there are also so many examples of love shown one person to another as well also fabulous examples of artistic endeavour.
I have probably gone off on one again so I shall stop while I am ahead

Thanks once again to everybody

Love and peace

Martin

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kJ Walker

Sun 25th Feb 2018 09:20

Hi Martin
I'm assuming this is about ancient conflicts between Catholics and Protestants. (i could be wrong,and often am)
Sadly it could also apply to the middle east today.
So many bad things have been done in the name of religion, and so many people have allowed themselves to be martyred, because they believe "they alone hold the true faith"

Apologies if i misunderstood it, but i did like the style and tone,all the same.

Cheers Kevin

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raypool

Sat 24th Feb 2018 21:58

This takes some getting into Martin, and really worth it! Not your usual fare perhaps. It seems to have conscience and individual choice at its heart, and takes us on a journey of self doubt , resolving into a philosophical acceptance. Nice!

Ray

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Fri 23rd Feb 2018 11:23

and what a clever lovely head you have Martin! as to our being the same...erm...you ain't grown boobies, have you?

???

( just to make you laugh and give me a good reason for getting my coat matey )

good job well-done squire!




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