Ariadne\\'s Thread

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 Beautiful, confused, heartfelt emotion,

 tinged with sadness yet filled with passion,

 a longing for things that may yet be;

 the beating of a lonely nervous heart

 thirsty for excitment, hungry for ecstacy.


 Confused by sadness, a lonely passion,

 sweeps in a whirlwind unexpectedly

 to destroy the emptiness.

 And now? A longing for what may be,

 soulful, sublime, seductive, serious


 Eyes met to weave a slender thread;

 two minds alike; fearful, fragile, tender, true.

 A strand of hope two hearts to bind

 as one in life's long and solitary night.

 Two hearts, two souls, for now and ever entwined.

◄ I Know You Are With Me Not

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 27th Nov 2009 12:17

This has some good lines. There are collections of words that seem, for me, a bit excessive, and therefore not capable of expressing their individual emotive power.

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