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Just when you think you’ve fallen too deep,

Lost in the pits of your mind,

There’s someone reaching out to you,

Saying leave your past behind.

Starting anew is harder than it seems,

Energies,thoughts and doubts linger in between.


My thoughts are drowning me in this sea of illusion,

Leaving me in a state of confusion.

For my mind is a challenge,

And self doubt is the name of the game.

I will not surrender!

I will not walk away ashamed!


Your kindness does not go unnoticed,

My thoughts ,sometimes, leave me frozen...

Inaction is not an excuse,

Forgive me if I seem aloof.





And Strength are all needed at this time

I shall move forward, let’s avoid rewind 


In exit — I close my mind 

Allowing the guidance of the divine


◄ New Beginnings

Warrior ►


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Gabrielle Renee'

Sun 4th Feb 2018 14:34

Thank you Cynthia I really appreciate your kind words and Sal thank you as well.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 4th Feb 2018 13:12

Great thoughts well put. Final two lines are an excellent closure. You write with flair. And 'flare' too, actually.

Big Sal

Sun 4th Feb 2018 02:27

I like the format of this one. Very easy flowing.

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