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You should Know

 

You should know

That some things 

Are beyond your control

 

Some things

You need to let go

 

It's not giving up

IF you've given it you're all

 

Let it all out

Then let it all go 

 

And when you're ready again

Then let the Light in

And let it grow...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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lisa donohoe

Thu 17th Jan 2019 08:20

Its not giving up if you've given it your all..
Let it all out ' then let it go...

Woww... beautiful choice of word's that hit home for many..

I loved this ?

Nicola Beckett

Thu 17th Jan 2019 06:25

Let the light in love this line xxx

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Wardah

Tue 20th Mar 2018 17:55

Thanks Douglas! I appreciate the comment?

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Douglas MacGowan

Fri 26th Jan 2018 07:02

I like this. A circular poem about severing and hope.

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