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lovers part


you took me to the happiest places,

i found peace in letting go, you taught me more than you'll ever know, the more time goes by, the more i grow, I'll never lose the memories, You grew tired of me, what you once loved became a nuance, I'll always be confused of this, I love myself more than you ever could have,tho even when you had the best of me we fought like enemies, not settling anything, when i ran away you always found me giving the last word to say, our blue turned to grey when you said "lets take a break" made me think i was the one that needed to change, the time away from you was so dark and strange, seeing you once again and you tell me "I dont wanna make things work so this is where it ends" and "I love you" when I went to leave, why did you kiss me? Im not sure of what i should believe for you i wouldve done anything, treated you like a king, I loved your company, maybe i didnt give you the space that you need, now that im gone i hope you feel freed.

◄ To love is to suffer

no more repeats. ►


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Raj Ferds

Tue 13th Aug 2019 06:42

Morning Myescape.

Just stumbled upon your poems and it was a refreshing surprise. I like your simplicity and sincerety. Raw emotions perhaps?
I used to live here then took a break. But I'm back and would love to read more ofyour work. So keep going. For me,WOL is an open platform to express exactly how we feel, irrespective of peoples' comments.

Take care.

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Douglas MacGowan

Thu 25th Jan 2018 07:25

This is a good capture of the mess and madness of lovers parting. Even walking away, so much remains and haunts.

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