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In rich new fields of untouched lush greenery
I shall drag the old dead cow with me
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<Deleted User> (16099)
Fri 23rd Feb 2018 17:39
I wish there is so much more to this poem so many lines you started with this fantastic jumping off point I wish you would've jumped And in the eye of the dead cow for a moment I thought it was winking back at me certain that I too would be dying in this night but I would not go quietly into the white ...I would instead sing in hope that old cow might hear me and
Like a newborn child come to dance with me again....
Thank you Christopher x
Perfect. I hope that cow rots and pieces can drop from it and give you freedom through the putrefaction.
Thank you ???
Man, I really like this. I have read it more than once and will read it again.
❤
A quick and interesting comparison of Past and Future.
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Ria Richardson
Sat 24th Feb 2018 23:48
Thank you Patrick
It’s lovely to meet you
Ria