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I shall drag the old dead cow with me

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Ria Richardson

Sat 24th Feb 2018 23:48

Thank you Patrick
It’s lovely to meet you

Ria

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Fri 23rd Feb 2018 17:39

I wish there is so much more to this poem so many lines you started with this fantastic jumping off point I wish you would've jumped And in the eye of the dead cow for a moment I thought it was winking back at me certain that I too would be dying in this night but I would not go quietly into the white ...I would instead sing in hope that old cow might hear me and
Like a newborn child come to dance with me again....

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Ria Richardson

Mon 5th Feb 2018 19:26

Thank you Christopher x

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Christopher Reeves

Mon 5th Feb 2018 19:02

Perfect. I hope that cow rots and pieces can drop from it and give you freedom through the putrefaction.

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Ria Richardson

Tue 23rd Jan 2018 22:34

Thank you 🙏🏼😘

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220August

Tue 23rd Jan 2018 22:30

Man, I really like this. I have read it more than once and will read it again.

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Ria Richardson

Thu 18th Jan 2018 08:02

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Douglas MacGowan

Thu 18th Jan 2018 07:04

A quick and interesting comparison of Past and Future.

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