FOUR
She falls away from me
shadows and height
into her paradise
We must live walled apart
else she destroy me
and I rake the shards of her past sins over her aging bones
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cracking last line doug. lifts the whole piece for me.
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Douglas MacGowan
Wed 10th Jan 2018 03:35
Thank you! I think this is the best of my earlier work.