There is comfort in the creaking of the stairs.
Each creak guiding, reminding you of your place,
Between the rise and the run,
The rhythm within the space.
There is comfort in the creaking of the stairs.
Thanks Ray. How's that? (I can't remember if each stop (Period) was like a "Step" taken originally. Today I agree with you.
<Deleted User> (14241)
Wed 13th Dec 2017 02:17
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A very nice idea this 220 A. You are kept in a state of suspension while ascending. With respect I preferred not to have the full stops- although on second thoughts just lose the ones after Runs and Space, so as to get a sort of stop - go sense. Or play with it - or totally ignore me whatever. Just an idea !
Ray
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Stu Buck
Wed 13th Dec 2017 15:34
excellent little piece. could go either way, to nostalgic romance or poe-like creepiness. clever.