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scourge

In supercolonies built

into the sky, overcrowded

 

we live and breathe in masks

 

and still they tell us

that it is a sin

 

to interfere with sexual

intercourse and the natural

cycles with which woman

was created then cursed

 

while praying for

the second coming

of their man-god

 

and the fulfillment

of their prophesy

 

of war and disease

that brings about

mass death.

◄ HAHAHA--it's only blood you silly nurse (or, more serious reflections upon M. Python's Holy Grail)

the pressure of the immaterial ►

Comments

elPintor

Mon 11th Sep 2017 03:15

Thanks, Colin and Ferris.

I would like to say that I wouldn't have continued writing in such a public forum had it not been for such a welcoming and diverse and open-minded community. Though I haven't been able to read and comment as much as I would like as of late, I continue to cherish the nature of the forum and the acquaintances I've found since my first post. It is really a joy to slowly get to know the pieces of your personalities that you've shown.

Rachel

elPintor

Sat 9th Sep 2017 23:55

Oh my gosh, Ray, thanks for the laugh.

I'll admit that I once had a short-lived run-in with organized religion. I was raised in an irreligious household (thankfully) and somehow got the idea that I could benefit spiritually from their sense of community, and even shared some (only some, and not even the top three) of their beliefs. But, I found that, ultimately, I couldn't reconcile my personal beliefs with theirs and felt I would eventually only become another practicer of their politics (of which there was plenty) if I were to continue voluntarily subjecting my psyche to their insidious coaxing. Though I have no desire to risk subverting another person's beliefs in favor of my own from within their own house, I also have no desire to undergo the awkward assimilation fitting in would require should I stay.

Thanks Ray,

Rachel


PS
I wish I could believe that women could do it better--though, I suspect that, ultimately, there would only be a "difference" rather than an "improvement".

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raypool

Sat 9th Sep 2017 17:53

A very valid and powerful account here Rachel. I've always thought that a matriarchal overarching world order would redeem the world - i'm sure it wouldn't be the first time if you went back far enough. We can put masturbation into the "no no" bin as well as it makes you go blind apparently!

Ray

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