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THE COLD POOL

The turquoise pool shimmered in the heat haze.

No scent of eucalyptus here though.

This is a roof top pool in New York.

Aroma, instead  of candy floss , sugary sweet.

The busy city below sounding

like a farm yard with the oink oink of car horns.

I apply lip balm and go  for

a hot, strong tea.

The young man with me is

my son and his child.

He has brought me for a few days in New York.

Posh hotel, posh swimming pool.

Next time he may take me

to Tahiti with its hot sand

and warm sea.

 

 

◄ SPRING

EXTINCT ►

Comments

Steve Smith

Wed 28th Oct 2009 12:27

An equation poem.Images of warmth over emptiness equals..? poignant.
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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 26th Oct 2009 10:44

This is brilliant with its overtones/undertones of meaning in family relationships and resultant attempted compensations.

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 24th Oct 2009 00:36

yeah... 'boom'...

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