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FIX EM UP GUYS

I always go

for the fix em up

guys

The ones that feed you

lies

To get between your

thighs

I believe the sweet words they

say

Like honey to a bee

they entice me

Wish I could run

before they start to have

fun

Breaking my heart.

By Lynn Hahn

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lynn hahn

Mon 21st Aug 2017 15:34

LOL so much fun! So the Bee should get even? Yes they do die. Hum maybe I will play with this one. Unlike a wasp who can sting and sting and sting and... you get the point...point? hum where am I going with this one???

<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 21st Aug 2017 08:01

Grrr!! them fix 'em up guys Lynn. Nicely rhymed. I would be tempted to insert a sting in the tail of this poem, as delivered from the bee. Perhaps get them to fix the boiler first or put up some shelves? But hang on, don't honey bees die after delivering their sting? Not sure where this comment is going so I will buzz off.
C?L

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