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hindsight (a late proto-proverbial observation)

Building silence bears down upon

whispers of what was once wild

 

and so,like feral animals

we are born disoriented

 

exploring rediscovered territory

while recklessly dismantling

 

a fictional stage set

for Pavlovian plays on

human loyalty and affection--

 

the masterless dog who's

drawn by the scruff and

released by the fray

 

dutifully ensures the coming night

 

so that dark is no longer

allowed to don the plying

disguise of conquering day.

◄ parastasis

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Stu Buck

Wed 16th Aug 2017 12:09

lovely stuff as usual and your new (well new to me) profile picture is great

elPintor

Mon 14th Aug 2017 02:00

I probably wouldn't even bother if I were you, David. Hells bells...I can't even be bothered to form a complete sentence when it comes to commenting on the work of others, lately--heaven knows I can't expect more from you.


The feelings don't change but the words often escape me,

Rachel x

elPintor

Sat 12th Aug 2017 05:55

Thanks, to all, who read..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3np0DMxXKzM


Rachel

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