Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

point this way

entry picture

pointed are: pointless the persuation,

pointing in our blanks the verse;

the unsaid lines of this invasion

saddend useless with the verbs.

 

weighted are: exagerated  tenses,

waiting in our queue the lines;

the handled change of this deception

worried senseless many times.

 

   

◄ The impossibility of knowing what's the probable causes and outcomes of finding your way around a certain 'tele-phone' company.

Various poems and replies from others in thier style- a thank you! ►

Comments

Profile image

kealan coady

Thu 15th Oct 2009 19:49

brilliant approach the words carry themselves carelessly and effortlessly through the poem.

<Deleted User> (6510)

Wed 14th Oct 2009 05:21

This is a real head spinner , I get into the poem and then it takes me off in another direction. I like it , it could send you bonkers trying to justify a full meaning and be happy you had done so - it has a lot going on.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message