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Driftwood

Driftwood

 

Gently rolling on the ocean foam,

With skies above

And sharks below,

I ramble round the seven seas to nowhere.

 

I twist in the current and churn with the waves,

Tempests crash,

Hurricanes pass,

The sunny days are welcome.

 

The peace and cold and wetness told,

And creatures use my shade as home;

For I am shelter where hurt fish cry,

A lushes shade in this vastness supply.

 

But now I pose, in a manmade shade

In an earthwork dug from spades;

As I reached a shore, was grabbed and adorned,

And in a landscape garden now I lay.

◄ We'd Fly Rings Around the Moon

Grandad's Armchair ►

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Toby Wheeler

Sat 24th Jun 2017 17:30

Thanks Colin...

I note what you say about 'to nowhere'. I hadn't picked up on that and I think you're right...I may re-think that line!

Toby

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 24th Jun 2017 09:03

alas I fear there is more plastic than wood drifting around our oceans which nobody wants to adorn their landscape gardens with.

Interesting subject matter Toby. Not sure about the choice of 'to nowhere' in the 4th line as it does end up somewhere by the last verse - but I see what you're getting at.

Colin.

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