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Baby you don't got me feeling blue
You got me feeling black
All I feel is darkness, I ain't never running back, to you
I can never do that, the feelings that u left me, got me rolling back, the time
When I thought you were mine, told you that I needed you and u decided that I'm, a waste
You thought you put us in our place, breaking up the good shit, all there's left is bullshit, a cave
That I buried myself in, trying nota get hurt again, ain't fucking with fake words again, blue
Blue is what I wish you left me, feeling black is empty, I just need some color back in my life

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 22nd Sep 2017 09:17

Heartfelt, strong poem.

Thank you for your comment on my poem 'Angel'.

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Martin Elder

Wed 21st Jun 2017 09:22

Hi iesha
great use of colour here, love the juxtaposition of blue and black and that line ' a cave I buried myself in'
fabulous

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