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Or Not

I hate these optics of mine
So blurred
So fragile
Completely unaware of what actually lie ahead
And when dropped... Oh the travesty
How do we replace them
Can they be altered
Can we get them to see clearly
I think without a miracle... probably not
Tuff this optic thing
Something seemingly easy
Yet so devote to short sightedness
It squander the big clear picture
In spite of what is what
And what is not
My million dollar question
Optics or not?

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Raj Ferds

Wed 7th Jun 2017 08:53

Hey Andres, I like this piece cause I can identify with it.
So I see your point (forgive the pun!).
Like the title, it's intriguing and draws the reader in. Nice one!

Wish we could ask for 20/20 vision. Ha ha ha.
Look ahead girl.

Raj

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