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Dad Says

Dad Says

 

It’s not the winning that counts;

It’s all about the taking part;                 

I shouldn’t seek out glory;                                

I shouldn’t take defeat to heart;            

Enjoy the nomination;                           

Keep a smile upon your face;               

Be magnanimous in losing;                    

Take a beating with good grace.           

 

But it wasn’t Dad that lost.                   

It wasn’t him that cleared a space         

Making way for this award;                  

It’s me that’s left with egg on face.       

 

Next time I won’t be premature,          

I’ll try to show reserve;            

To demonstrate humility.                      

Dad says he knows what I deserve.     

◄ Pendle Witches

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Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 8th Oct 2009 10:46

Very wise words Mr Mellor.
Hope you weren't too disappointed. :-)

Janet.x

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Isobel

Wed 7th Oct 2009 22:20

I love your tongue in cheek humour Steve - it is uplifting. My old dad used to say the following:
'When life's great scorer
Comes to write against my name
He'll mark not if I lost or won
But how I played the game'

I wish we could have put it on his headstone but there wasn't room - we tend to squash them in, in our family - there are just too many of us.

So glad to see that you are gracious in defeat - I hope that you will keep on entertaining us with you poetry though. How did it go in Hebden?
x

steve mellor

Wed 7th Oct 2009 17:27

I should probably make it clear that this is the sequel to 'Have I Won' posted at the beginning of the month.
I had it written just in case

<Deleted User> (6510)

Wed 7th Oct 2009 17:00

Interesting poem which can have different interpretations, I like it Steve.

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