I wrote this months ago but it seems appropriate to post today after Colin Hill's 'Jesús the Everyman' poem.
excuse me, can
you spare a dime
for this old boy
long past his prime?
At ninety six
I find that I'm
still reaching out
to beg for time
Ditto what the others said. Short and sweet. Loved it
cheers Kevin
Thanks Stu, very apt comments.
Cheers,
Paul
excellent little ditty yes. tuneful and sparse, but with a lot of sadness and loss.
Thank you Col and MGS, for the likes and comments, very grateful to you both.
Paul
<Deleted User> (16513)
Wed 10th May 2017 09:20
Short but inspiring... Little but remarkable... what a precise art. Love it.?
<Deleted User> (13762)
Wed 10th May 2017 09:05
aw cheers mate xx I love it when one post sparks another into life. Short and sweet unlike my lengthy ramblings lol.
C?L
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Paul Waring
Thu 11th May 2017 15:26
Thank you Kevin, much appreciated.
Paul