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reportage of the ancient birds

a language drawn in
through loops of musical notes
pitching high in tunes
of soulful melodies
carried out
by ancestoral birds
that perched on
ancient
climbing
slave temples
who once there
observed
blood and death
in life hung out
and dry
behind eyes that blinked
through sand and sadness
in hopes cut
but shared
and with the birds
dreams travelled far
past tree-tops
and the lasts of sky
to beautiful lands
blind
unknown
the place of plenty birds
where the eyes in the bodies and the minds of the bound
would have taken flight to
and settled down in
if only birds could have carried their dreams:
out

◄ preparing to freefall

one last sunday morning walk ►

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Noetic-fret!

Mon 28th Sep 2009 22:30

Nice one emily, i am drawn to birds. soon be winter where i will have to resupply them with seed. well, the ones that visit the garden anyways. be well. I enjoyed this, the rythem and its content.

Mike

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Nichola Burrows

Mon 28th Sep 2009 11:56

I am drawn by the the song of the birds to this and the feeling of time passing, and dreams of hope - ancient hope - that have been shared with the birds, maybe to carry down the aeons of time.

A thought provoking piece that I think maybe I need to read again.

dreams that have not been fullfilled and lessons that have not been learned.

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