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HISTORIES AND MYSTERIES

We enjoyed the mysteries of the pyramids of Giza

looking up at the leaning Tower of Piza

and other visual delights

 

then with curiosity sated,

in various hotels

deep into the night

we discovered the mysteries

of interplanetary flight.

 

Long have we been together

those mysteries now dormant like dreams,

but I do know this, that

still on a whim

those histories

and attributes may echo to a kiss.

◄ NIGHT ERRORS

OLD POLITICIANS ►

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raypool

Fri 7th Apr 2017 21:19

Aythangyow Paul - i'm afraid the reference was purely between the sheets !

Col: I love the brevity and nice to hear from you .

Martin: Glad you enjoyed this, cheers.

Ray

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Martin Elder

Fri 7th Apr 2017 18:00

The line about interplanetary flight definitely gives the poem a real sense of mystery on another level.
Nice one Ray

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Fri 7th Apr 2017 10:20

lovely

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Paul Waring

Fri 7th Apr 2017 08:42

Wow Ray, what a trip ?

Were you, by any chance, also engaged in calling occupants of interplanetary, most extraordinary, craft? ?

Just a thought.

Paul

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